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24 Reviews | 13 w/ Responses
A decent flash. Definitely not the worst I have seen. I know you can do better and I would like to see you try. Length is obviously an issue here. Also, a change of scenery is needed. I did like how there was always something happening though.
Author's Response:
thanks very much, definately a valid review, and one taken into account for further animations..
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I like how each one has more action than the last...you are getting better. There is not very much I can say, but I still must ask that you spend more time on this. I know that you can do better and I will be waiting to see it...good luck!
Author's Response:
nice thanx i think my next one should be even better
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I am glad that it wasn't badly drawn sticks but it wasn't your best. Still mildly funny. I would just say...work on it. My biggest problem with this was the way that the sound jumped in and out...honestly I can't stand that.....turning up the volume to hear what they are saying and then there is some loud sound effect...ouch
Author's Response:
yea sum1 else mentioned that. i need a better microphone or sum audio editing software. I'll try harder next time i try sumtin like this... u think my stix r bad? sad to say they r my strong point
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I liked it better than the last. More action, better effects, and funnier. I take it you do all of these with a mouse? Anyways, good work and did I detect a Princess Bride joke in there?
Author's Response:
yea i use the mouse, u have a better suggestion? yep pricess bride fa sho. indigo montoya
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Funny clips, mild action...it is good. I am sure you know that the actual animating needs work so I won't say much about that. Good job again
Author's Response:
fa sho. working on that
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I'm good with sprite flashes and I know how hard they are to do, nonetheless you need to make it more exciting. Like I said, it was good, and the story was pretty funny, but you need spice. Not much else to say...good job
Author's Response:
thnx alot for reviewing. I'll get to less tlk more action next time
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That was somewhat odd, although I found it a bit humorous. I could ask you to spend a bit more time on it, but for all I know that might be your best. If that was your best then great work. If it was not then decent work.
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
And yes sorry for the whining
Ive gotten better from this I have a new movie coming up so far its my best flash!
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I like the concept, but you could put a little work into the actual animation. More frames perhaps. All in all, pretty good.
Author's Response:
Thanks... All the bugs in this one (such as the animation/more frames) will be done in the second one. In this one I was working in 12 FPS in the second I'm trying 20 FPS :D But thanks for viewing and voting !
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Ah....this is even better...very creative
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
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That was good, sad, and original...Good for you
Author's Response:
Ah, thanks for watching my toon :) I appreciate it
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